Course evaluation

This year, American Studies has been a unique class experience for me. I had never had a class with two teachers and I was interested as to how it would work. I found that I liked the system because with both classes in the same room, it made getting work in a lot easier. As a course, I both liked and disliked some things. I liked the way the subjects were set up in the history half of the class. It made it very easy and straight foreword to study. When you keep track of all the study guides, you can form a sort of time line the outlines all that you learned. This makes studying a breeze and that really takes some of the stress off from that time. I also liked the video series that we watched in class. It was informative but it wasn’t incredibly boring like most school videos are. I felt like did miss out on a bit of info when we didn’t talk about JFK but other than that I have very little to complain about. As for the English half, I don’t have much negative to say either. I liked how much time we spent on difficult subjects. The final review guide really helped me focus on what I needed to study so that was a plus as well. Probably the only thing I didn’t like was how we didn’t read any more books for class. I enjoyed To Kill A Mockingbird but we didn’t get to read any other classic books this year. The weekly calendar was a huge help just like you had said it would be. It really kept me on track for my long term assignments. It also was very useful because it told me the due dates of my homework. As for the writer’s notebook, I both liked it and disliked it. It really did help me and that’s why I liked it but I did find it to be a lot of work every week. As a whole I would have to say that America Studies is a good course with that leaves me with few complaints.

Literary Critique For Insomnia

               “You would have trouble sleeping too if you had seen what Ralph Roberts has.” The book Insomnia by Stephen King is both chilling and gripping. Stephen King is a renowned author who has written several excellent books to date. He wrote classics such as The Shining, Firestarter, and Cujo. This book keeps you guessing at the plot, it involves interesting elements not apparent in the average book, and the character depth is really well done. If you haven’t guessed already, I really enjoyed reading this book.            

            The plot development is really well done and shows how great a writer Stephen King is. At first the plot itself isn’t very apparent and almost seems like the book is about how the main character, Ralph, deals with the death of his wife. “Sometimes he thought of the places he and Carolyn used to go in the old days…”(41). Then the story completely changes directions when a local neighbor’s behavior changes completely. “He wondered if that was the smell of Ed’s madness.”(81). About halfway through the book, just about when you start to get a grip on the strange things Ralph is seeing, the story changes again by introducing three new characters. This wouldn’t be a problem except that only Ralph and the crazy Ed can see them. This leads to many questions unique to this book and those like it.

            The book has many questions that force you to keep reading as well as many other unique elements. First is a question that drives the entire story but is completely unspoken by the author. This is the question of Ralph’s sanity. He is older and has developed insomnia so his state of mind is very easily questioned. Then the way the author describes things in a third-person limited view is very interesting. Finally, how the author seeds many clues into the story but doesn’t let you know they were there until you solve the entire puzzle was really unique and gave the story a life of its own. One clue and unique point was in the character depth.

            Stephen King’s character depth was a great strength in this book. The secondary and fringe characters aren’t very developed in their own stories but rather through the main characters story and background. He is old and he has experience with almost all the members of his town. Every character is described through the eyes of a kindly neighbor who either grew up with them or watched them grow up. “Ralph recollected back to when he was fascinated by the way she glided without the aid of a cane, even at such an old age.”(347). This gives the characters a refreshingly different impression on the reader.     

            The book Insomnia is a really great read and I really enjoyed it. I would give the book a 4.5 out of 5. The only complaint I have with the book is that it starts out very slowly. It takes a few chapters to pick up steam and a few descriptions are a bit long-winded but overall the book is very well done. The plot keeps you guessing, the unique elements in the book make it a very good read, and the character book is interesting and refreshing. I really liked the book and would recommend it to anyone who enjoys a good mystery or thriller.

TKaM Reflection

            The most difficult part of writing this review was the fact that it was due after Spring Break. This required that it be worked on over the break and finding time was challenging. Not because I was overly busy or didn’t have enough time but because the motivation wasn’t there. During Spring Break you don’t have to think about school as much as you do regularly and this made the critique easy to blow off. Regardless of all this, however, I did the review over break despite my difficulties getting motivated.

            The strongest part of my review is when I talked about what I liked about the book. I wouldn’t say that any part of the review is exactly award winning but I like the way I phrased some of the sentences in that paragraph. I tried to use powerful language that would show exactly how I felt about the book.

            As I wrote the review I guess some would say that I gained a new in sight on life but I wouldn’t say that exactly. I gained a respect for how much effort it would take to create a book and saw how vain some of my dislikes were compared to this and a bigger picture of the world. Now this isn’t exactly some great wisdom that I have discovered but rather a slightly different way of viewing things that will always stay in the back of my mind.

TKaM Review/ Critique

The book I’m reviewing is To Kill A Mocking Bird by Harper Lee. Lee never considered her book to be anything more than a simple story but it is widely regarded as a true classic. The story is a fantastic read and is great the first time or the fourth, the writing style and character depth also helped make the book the masterpiece it is, and the character diversity makes it possible for everyone to connect with the book and the characters therein. 

It is a classic tale that takes place in a small southern town. Everybody knows everybody else, for better or for worse. There’s the town bum, the gossip, and of course the town’s mysterious figure that inspires stories for the younger children. For several of their younger years, two children named Scout and Jem enjoy speculating and attempting to see this person. They soon forget, however, when their town is rocked by something far larger. Their father, Atticus, is a prominent law lawyer who is chosen to defend an African American. Most of the little town turns against him and his children who don’t understand what is happening very well. The judge tries for a fair trail but the jury was racist and didn’t agree with the judge. They lost the case but grew up through the course of it.

            I liked several things about this book, including the writing style, character depth, but I didn’t like the way characters talked. The writing style gave the reader a clear view of the town of Maycomb and all its inhabitants. It was vivid and clear. The characters themselves were as interesting as the story. They acted according to personalities set by the author and responded to situations like actual people would. That being said, the way the characters talked with their southern drawl made many sections of dialogue incredibly difficult to read and follow. Overall, the book was incredibly good despite the speech problem.

            I think I identify most with Jem out of all the characters in the book. I remember going through a lot of similar things when I was that age. For example, Scout once asked Atticus if Jem had a tapeworm due to his apetite change (115). I remember going through the exact same thing at that age. At certain points in the book I could see myself doing the same thing Jem did. The feeling that comes to mind when I think of this book would have to be that of happiness. The mood of most of the book is happy and the way Scout describes things puts them in the light of childish innocence. An example of which would be when Scout asked: “Hey, Mr. Cunningham. How’s your entailment gettin’ along?”(153). She didn’t know that he was part of a mob intent on hurting her father. This combined with the similarity to Jem gave me a good feeling when I read the book. 

            The timeless, classic tale in To Kill A Mockingbird is rightly considered an  American masterpiece. Going through the overview of the story took me back through the book, reliving the best moments. The writing style and character depth were great even though I didn’t like the way the people talked in the story. Finally, the childlike innocence, and my relatability to Jem helped make this book even better for me. Overall, I would give this book a 5 out of 5 on any scale.

Writer’s Notebook DBQ

I have been writing almost daily now for a few months in my writer’s notebook and if you look through my entries you could see my progress as a reader, writer, and reader. I’ll be the first to admit that some of the entries aren’t consistent with the best I can do. I’ve come to notice that when I really try to write well, the result is several times better than what I do when I don’t give my best effort. For example I write a sentence like “The 20’s and the Great Depression stand in stark contrast” compared to “School can be very boring.” I’ll let you make the decision on which is better. Overall, when I look back through my entries as a writer I see I have progressed not only in conventions and word choice but in thinking and the thought put into my entries.

            Throughout the writer’s notebook I have had times where thoughts and ideas for topics came easily while other times I was grasping in the dark for ideas. I find that as time gets on and I progress farther into becoming better writers, ideas start to come more easily. I have to say, you did say this would happen at the beginning of the year. In the beginning I struggled to come up with topics like a Venn diagram of present and future times while now I write about topics such as why we entered WWI. What I like to write about most is when I create little stories in some of the entries. My favorite type of writing is to write stories with characters, places, and a plot. Even in my WN, however, I feel I can’t write as freely as I can on say a story about a less relevant topic. It feels almost forced but I know that it’s partly due to my lacking time management skills. Anyway, I find that my content is growing along with my writing and my ability to read it.

            When I talk about reading I’m not talking about taking it on a literal level but a looking deeper into the writing. I’m finding it easier to look at a piece of poetry and see what the author meant with each little innuendo and hint. My current poem “Democracy” by Langston Hughes was a sign of this. I read the words and immediately knew they had more than face value. Upon rereading the poem I have come to see that Langston Hughes is calling for freedom of African Americans now. At the beginning of the year I would have never realized that there was much underneath the surface and even if I did I wouldn’t understand what it was. As a reader, writer, and thinker I’d say I have progressed fairly far.

            This year I have made advancements in my reading, writing, and thinking skills. In my writing my conventions and word usage is getting better. In my thinking I am growing in ideas and content. Finally, my reading is also growing for I can read something and take it for more than face value and read deeper into the meaning of the words. I know I have far to go to become great at any of these three skills but I hope I’m at least making progress. Overall this year, I have grow in my reading, writing , and thinking skills

The Last Monday of January

When I was about 10 years old I learned how to ride a bike and became addicted to reading at the same time. I remember hating my bike because I would fall off and or scrape my leg almost every time I attempted to ride. Eventually, the bike would just bring a feeling of dread whenever it was mentioned. My parents would beg and beg but I flat out refused to ride my bike. Eventually, they resorted to bribes to get me to ride. I was a very big fan of the Harry Potter series at that age and there just happened to be a box set of the first four books at a local store that I really wanted. My parents offered that to me in exchange for riding my bike. The very next day my dad took me to the park with the dreaded bike. To my dad’s utter astonishment, and slight dismay, I hopped on the accursed machine and rode off without hesitation. My dad stood there agape while I happily rode along to the steady tick, tick, tick of the chain.

            “You hustled me!” my dad exclaimed accusatorily.

            I didn’t respond but continued to ride in circles enjoying my monumental accomplishment. True to their word, I sat on a couch a few days later as happy as a clam reading my books. It was a rather expensive set because they were all hardcover, and to this day my dad still claims I hustled him although I didn’t understand the meaning of the word at the time. However, it was a positive thing because these books were the jump off point for my like of reading. I still own these books to this day.

The Last Monday of October

My second full month of high school is drawing to a close and I’ve learned a few things in that time. First I’m beginning to see why its so hard to keep up your grades. Grades are weighted and tests are worth so much more than what i’m used to. In all my classes tests are worth about 70% of my grade. This is especially tough in biology, where it seems like there’s a test every week. Studying for said tests is somewhat of a challenge for me because it doesn’t come naturally to me and I have to force myself to actually sit down and do the work. I am also finding it incredibly hard to keep track of all my work and turning it in on time. I know that there are students who are handling this perfectly and that I have no excuse. I just need to get my act together. On a lighter note, I pleasantly surprised myself in biology of all classes. I got a 94% on my midterm test that i was braced to tank on. I even got a 100% on the essay part. Ironically I hadn’t considered that my best class. Oh well, overall I was pleased with my midterms. I got all As and a B, barely. I had the lowest grade possible to have an A but I’ll take it. I just plan on trying harder to keep my grades up. As I mentioned before, grading is very different in high school and I need to adjust.I’m getting there however, if a little slowly. I plan on trying out for basketball and thats gona put more stress on my schedual so I hope i can keep it together. I think I can and im surely going to try. Oh well, until next month….

The Last Monday of September

My first month in high school went pretty well overall. My classes are challenging but not in an impossible way. The hardest part has to be the mornings. Ironically, the hardest are mondays.Staying awake in later classes has also been somewhat of a challenge but I’ve managed so far. Another thing to add to my list of grievances are block classes. I have eight hours of school and only three classes. Sitting still for hours at a time isn’t my thing. I get restless and don’t focus as well and this results in a suffering from my grade. On the other hand I might just need more tim to get used to this shift in my schedule. Other than that its been fairly smooth sailing. I have all the routes down and no longer get lost wondering the halls. I’ve learned a great deal in my month here, both about myself and academically speaking. Educationally, I’ve learned such diverse subjects from how African-American people were treated after the Civil War in american studies to how to name and draw molecules in biology. Personally I’ve discovered feelings I never knew I had or just didn’t fell strongly enough to notice. For instance, I have no tolerance for racism of any kind of hurtful manner. A joke now and then is fine but actual racism I can’t stand. An unexpected difficulty that sort of blind sided me was surprisingly getting to class on time. My locker  is on the exact opposite side of the school from all of my classes. This proves to be incredibly annoying on those days when your just a bit off. Luckily I haven’t messed up on any tests, and hopefully never will. The hardest of these have been a biology test. We were in the unit for about a week I’d say and then we had an incredibly hard and utterly annoying test. What makes these very stressful is that they count for seventy percent of our overall grade. One slip and your grade goes into a spiral. If I could do it over again I would, just for the sake of being somewhat of a perfectionist  but the extra points would help. I’ve never been all that good at studying but I usually don’t need to. Hopefully the next last monday will see me with good again.

The First….

 This is my first blog, ever. I never had the time or the want to make one on my own time. However, school changes such things. I drug  my feet in making this blog but part of that is due to my own lazyness. The other part for my delay was a reluctance to write my thoughts onto the web. Either way here I am. Its not to hard, I guess, and once I get going its easier. By the end of the year who knows, I might just like blogging.